Hmm…pic stories without headlines are vulnerable to this sort of thing – a little more thought would have made it all work better. First, the three column text needs to go – a two column layout is much easier on the reader’s eye. Then, sizing the picture down by about three percent would have created enough room to box it out properly with a bolder rule and some white space, or a tint/WOB box for the whole ensemble, either of which would have held it off from the splash headline. A bolder crop at the bottom would have allowed for a one-line header too.
It’s easy to see how they could be seen as intimidating. Look at those teeth.
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Hmm…pic stories without headlines are vulnerable to this sort of thing – a little more thought would have made it all work better. First, the three column text needs to go – a two column layout is much easier on the reader’s eye. Then, sizing the picture down by about three percent would have created enough room to box it out properly with a bolder rule and some white space, or a tint/WOB box for the whole ensemble, either of which would have held it off from the splash headline. A bolder crop at the bottom would have allowed for a one-line header too.
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